I soon would melt in your hands
And you became regular in my plans.
Forever nineteen, so frozen in time
Twenty years passed so fast
But you are built to last.
Forever nineteen, so frozen in time
The months layered on in this bright salon
A rich text of news and playfulness
Left me wanting more, I confess.
Now suddenly everything’s casually
A spring and surprise to an old friend
Sure funny to look back how it began.
Forever nineteen, frozen in time to me
Twenty years passed by just today
And you still sweep me away.
Forever nineteen, so frozen in time
Still a Metallic Fan livin’ with the postman
A soccer mom queen and forever nineteen.
Forever nineteen, so frozen in time
Forever nineteen, such light shine, frozen in time.
By Dave Schipper © 2009 Rose Riversongs

I did worry a little about needing to get this more personal to make it effective as a song more people can relate to... maybe I need a co-writer to the write lines that I'm too cautious to write about a good friend. HA.
For song writers out there... I started with the premise and hook "Forever Nineteen"... my search on the phrase did show that alot of themes wrapped around this was linked to people dying and frozen in time. I hope I captured that but turned it around, Nat is alive and well but when I look in those eyes I still that teenage girl that loves Metallica.
Of course ... you can't let the muse rest when the day has presented an afternoon alone ... so here is the freshest written song to be posted to youtube... it actually doesn't match the blog... watch for the improvements.
1 comment:
Hi David,
Way to take a line and run with it, or a phrase as it might be. I did that once when my friend, who is teaching prisoners to read, mentioned "the importance of vowels". The just resounded in me, I use a different delivery system than do you though. Good for you!
Hugs,
Kim
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